Blog
Reflection
The
quality of my writing has improved multiple ways over the course of the
trimester. One way that my writing has improved would be that towards the end
of the trimester I used a lot more textual evidence in my blog posts than I did
in the beginning of the trimester. In the post from earlier in the trimester I connected
two different texts and explained how they were similar. However, I didn’t use
any quotes to support what I was saying. For example I was talking about how
the characters in both novels are similar. I wrote, “The main characters in
each book are a brother and sister pair who are very different from each other,
both in personality and appearance.” I went on to explain the ways that they
were alike but I never used any evidence from the book that showed their characterization.
In my post from the end of the trimester I talked about the cliff hangers that
ended each chapter in my book. I used actual quotes from the end of different
chapters and explained how they were each a cliff hanger for me. For example I
wrote, “The text says, ‘Tanya, Elizabeth Elvesden never came out of the asylum.
She died in there when she was only twenty-three' (Harrison 108). Reading this
gave me the chills. I had to keep reading on to figure out what other mysteries
the house held.” Another way that my writing has improved would be that I was
able to connect elements in my book to things other than different literature.
In my older post I did make a connection from my book but it was with another
book. My post said, “Currently I am reading The Throne of Fire by Rick Riordan.
This is the second book in the Kane Chronicles. As I have been reading this
novel I have noticed it has many similarities to the book Children of The Lamp:
The Akhenaten Adventure by P.B. Kerr. Both of these stories are centered around
the element of magic.” Connecting a novel to another novel is fairly easy and I
found that as the trimester went on, I was able to connect elements in my book
to more things. In the post I wrote at the end of the trimester I talked about
how cliff hangers are not only used in books such as my own but in other things
such as the TV series Touch. I wrote,
“Books aren't the only things that use cliff hangers to their advantage. Movies
use them to get you to want to see the sequel and TV shows use them so you
watch the next season. For example one of my favorite series Touch ended with
the biggest cliff hanger.”
One
thing that I struggled with through the experience was the decision of what to blog
about. There were some days where I had a perfect idea of what I wanted to
write about and then there were other days where I had no clue. To overcome
this I had to force myself to think outside of the box and come up with more
than just your basic book topics. I began to write about other pieces of
writing besides what I was reading and I came up with ideas such as how to pick
out a good book. One strength I had with blogging would be my ability to write
thorough posts. Whether I was summarizing or discussing a literary element in a
book, I explained what I was talking about very clearly with great detail. I did not meet my reading goal but I found
goodreads.com to be a very beneficial sight. It was very useful for being able
to get good book recommendations. I liked how you could see what your friends
were reading and I enjoyed that I was able to rate books that I had read. Over
the course of the trimester I would say that my reading has improved in the
sense that I have learned to reflect more on my reading. I also have gotten
better at paying attention to literary detail in the books. Before I read only
to enjoy a good story, but now I have learned to read so that I can appreciate
the effect an author’s style of writing has on the story.
